Road to Light
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mi lo
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18-Aug-2010 22:15 CEST |
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Fine motive & composition
As I wrote in the subject, it's a very nice motive with dramatic sky and it's also composed well.
However, I don't like the effect of excessive usage of S/H function or HDR blending which resulted in very unnatural look (shifts of exposure) of the bushes and hills below the sky.
Also, you could have cropped it a bit on the left and the bottom to avoid a few items which draw attention to that corner too much.
Nikolas Grabar at 22:39 CEST on 18-Aug-2010 [Reply]
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Thanks for your feedback.
It's very well-motivated, even if i don't agree :)
It's very pleasant to be criticize by someone who really knows what he is talking about.
You're absolutely right about the bottom-left crop.
Thanks again and have a nice day
mi lo at 22:48 CEST on 18-Aug-2010 [Reply]
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The basic idea is good, but there are some weaknesses in the processing: white balance (too much red) and colours could be improved. Some more contrast would help. The bigger problem are those clouds in the background, which are not optimal.
Alfred Molon at 00:45 CEST on 19-Aug-2010 [Reply]
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thanks for your Feedback Alfred
mi lo at 13:23 CEST on 19-Aug-2010 [Reply]