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Shervi

Shervi
Copyright ©2010, James Wang
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Photographer: James Wang
Folder: 100116 Modeling Photo Practice
Uploaded: 01-Feb-2010 03:50 CET
Current Rating: 6.50/2
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Model release available: 1
Camera: Olympus E620
Exposure time: 1/800
Aperture: 3.5
Focal length: 58
Lens: 12-60 mm
Focusing method: iESP P-AF
ISO: 200
White balance: Auto
Flash: no
Image format: HQ
Processing applied:
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Image resized to: 640x480

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hi

I like the natural light that falls on the model. Tha tatoo is interesting. I don't like so much the direct look of the model to the camera. I think you shoul give a totally diferent atmosphere it she would look just a little to the right.

But still a very nice photo.

Greetings,
Damjan

Damjan Gosak at 18:58 CET on 04-Feb-2010 [Reply]

An alternative suggestion

Look where the lines in this photo are leading? The building roof lines above the model's head, the sidewalk boundaries and the building facade. They are leading to a point in the background.

I think you would get a much stronger image by keeping the same focal length, same camera position, but move the model into the background, closer to where the lines would draw the viewers' eyes.

Bob Shrader at 02:17 CET on 21-Mar-2010 [Reply]